Conrad Rice

Banned for having a dancing Spider-Man.

What the World Need Now- The Carpenters

Firefly House Wipeout Spectacular Spider-Man

I Melt With You- Modern English

Banned for being the 10th gamechanger in the world.

So much for your critique thread being closed, huh?

He felt another boot between his ribs. It didn’t hurt as bad as the many others before it, but it was enough to make him caw with pain. This raised ...

wisemann, fourthelement, your stories are done.

Well, wisemann, this has some good points and some bad points. Good points first. I can say that a child would be interesting in the basic story that you're telling ...

Wow, talk about a pluck at my heartstrings story. I really connected with Colin and Ash, but I didn't understand why Ash was moving really. Were her parents sending her ...

Wow, that was good. I liked the way you set up the Champions of the Dark and Light Angels, and the duality that existed between them. You might consider breaking ...

TL G-Wooster, yours has been critiqued.

Here we shall talk of plotting, that wonderful activity that writers undertake when they create a story. They spend paper, time, and brainpower working out just what will happen in ...

It's usually Courier New for me. It makes it look like a typewriter, and that helps me. Though lately I've been switching to Bookman Old Style, for a change of ...

A nice set of interesting stories. There's a lot of stuff that's left unexplained, but I guess that's alright, seeing as how this is for a contest. I am kind ...